what if a much of a which of a wind
what if a much of a which of a wind
gives the truth to summer's lie;
bloodies with dizzying leaves the sun
and yanks immortal stars awry?
Blow king to beggar and queen to seem
(blow friend to fiend: blow space to time)
-when skies are hanged and oceans drowned,
the single secret will still be man
what if a keen of a lean wind flays
screaming hills with sleet and snow:
strangles valleys by ropes of thing
and stifles forests in white ago?
Blow hope to terror; blow seeing to blind
(blow pity to envy and soul to mind)
-whose hearts are mountains, roots are trees,
it's they shall cry hello to the spring
what if a dawn of a doom of a dream
bites this universe in two,
peels forever out of his grave
and sprinkles nowhere with me and you?
Blow soon to never and never to twice
(blow life to isn't; blow death to was)
-all nothing's only our hugest home;
the most who die, the more we live
Commentary
An extremely explanationless poet (the e. e. was no accident :)). I don’t level that as an accusation. I lay it down as a tribute. When meaning darts in and out of a poem the way it does when you’re with cummings, the elusiveness doesn’t irritate… it enchants and intrigues(in the very best way possible). cummings has figured on this list before, several times1. And while it’s relatively easy to familiarize oneself with the sheer drama of his innovation and his audacious powers of invention… it’s a little more difficult to stop being surprised by him. cummings is such an inexhaustibly lively poet. And this is a poem of crazy, sweeping whatifs. A poem brimful of lines that make music for you before (if ever) they make sense. I love the way the verses are built. Beginning with a vivid riddle, spiralling into a two-line almost-incantation, closing each, with something wise, glinting… and enigmatic. What is curious to me, about this poem, is the way it compels – combining a playfulness of tone, grammar and rhyme, with a series of merciless, even cruel images and ideas. There is a strange violence here. An impartial, indifferent violence that spares nothing, no one. Not monarchs or mountains, the stars or the elements, not space and time or you and me. Nowhere in evidence here is the delicate, crystal-veined fragility that cummings is so excruciatingly capable of (“nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands”2). But while this is not a tremulous poem, neither is it irredeemably harsh. Because there is something inconquerable inside of it. Something in the ‘single secret’, the ‘cry hello’ and ‘the more we live’ that seems to convey a spirit transcending the violence of vocabulary, a wisdom beyond ordinary compassion. Maybe I’m way off track here. Highly possible. It’s hard to tell with cummings…
… all I truly know is that I really like the voice of his sound.
— pavi
Poem #56, “pity this busy monster, manunkind”
Poem #139, “Buffalo Bill’s/ defunct”
Poem #214, “Where’s Madge then,”
Poem #311, “Untitled”
Poem #454, “If I have made, my lady, intricate”
Poem #492, “Poem 42”
Poem #619, “somewhere i have never travelled” on the Minstrels website.