Where's Madge then,
Where's Madge then,
Madge and her men?
buried with
Alice in her hair,
(but if you ask the rain
he'll not tell where.)
beauty makes terms
with time and his worms,
when loveliness
says sweetly Yes
to wind and cold;
and how much earth
is Madge worth?
Inquire of the flower that sways in the autumn
she will never guess.
but i know
my heart fell dead before.
Commentary
There is a certain quality to Cummings’ poems that is at once elusive and unmistakable. Part of it does lie in the ‘concrete verse’ aspects; the irregular capitalization and indentation. However, that that is far from the whole story can be seen in today’s poem, which is wholly free of such effects. The conversational tone, the phrases and images that hover deceptively on the edge of childishness, the deliberately simple rhymes all combine to make up a whole that is breathtakingly greater than the sum of its parts. It’s hard to point to any one bit and say ‘this is good because…’, and yet the poem as a whole is wonderful, and has not a word out of place.
For Cummings’ biography etc, see poem #57
— Martin
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Fiona Whyte · 25 February 2005
Is this poem somehow connected with “All in green went my love riding”? As they both end with the same line. Is this poem a sequal?