Prayer before Birth
I am not yet born; O hear me.
Let not the bloodsucking bat or the rat or the stoat or the
club-footed ghoul come near me.
I am not yet born, console me.
I fear that the human race may with tall walls wall me,
with strong drugs dope me, with wise lies lure me,
on black racks rack me, in blood-baths roll me.
I am not yet born; provide me
With water to dandle me, grass to grow for me, trees to talk
to me, sky to sing to me, birds and a white light
in the back of my mind to guide me.
I am not yet born; forgive me
For the sins that in me the world shall commit, my words
when they speak to me, my thoughts when they think me,
my treason engendered by traitors beyond me,
my life when they murder by means of my
hands, my death when they live me.
I am not yet born; rehearse me
In the parts I must play and the cues I must take when
old men lecture me, bureaucrats hector me, mountains
frown at me, lovers laugh at me, the white
waves call me to folly and the desert calls
me to doom and the beggar refuses
my gift and my children curse me.
I am not yet born; O hear me,
Let not the man who is beast or who thinks he is God
come near me.
I am not yet born; O fill me
With strength against those who would freeze my
humanity, would dragoon me into a lethal automaton,
would make me a cog in a machine, a thing with
one face, a thing, and against all those
who would dissipate my entirety, would
blow me like thistledown hither and
thither or hither and thither
like water held in the
hands would spill me.
Let them not make me a stone and let them not spill me.
Otherwise kill me.
Commentary
I love the headlong momentum of this poem. MacNeice’s poetry is usually delicately balanced, informed by a world of possibility (and uncertainty). Not so “Prayer before Birth”, in which phrase piles on phrase in a desperate catalogue of the perils of contemporary life. The cascading lines, heavy in their use of internal rhymes and repetitions, assonances and alliteration, are insistent, driving, a crazed litany; they’re powerful, yet wonderfully poignant. The unborn child speaking this dramatic monologue could be any of us.
— Thomas
Minstrels Links
Louis MacNeice:
Poem #18, Bagpipe Music
Poem #521, The Suicide
Poem #757, The Sunlight on the Garden
Poem #864, Snow
Various prayers:
Poem #177, Where The Mind is Without Fear – Rabindranath Tagore
Poem #344, The Navajo Night Way Ceremony – Anon. (Navajo)
Poem #349, A Prayer to the Sun – Geoffrey Hill
Poem #987, Prayer – Carol Ann Duffy
Poem #1007, Abide With Me – Henry F. Lyte
Poem #1020, A Prayer for My Daughter – William Butler Yeats
Poem #1029, Prayer (to the sun above the clouds) – Piet Hein
[Somewhat Technical Afterthought]
“Prayer before Birth” may look like free verse, but it’s actually carefully structured. Apart from the devices mentioned above, note the extensive use of dactyls (metrical feet of one stressed and two unstressed syllables), which contribute to the cadence of the poem:
my thoughts when they think me
- / - - / -
my treason engendered by traitors beyond me,
- / - - / - - / - - / -
my life when they murder by means of my hands,
- / - - / - - / - - /
The poet also uses the occasional spondee (two consecutive stresses) to prevent the rhythm from becoming monotonous:
I fear that the human race may with tall walls wall me, - / - - / - / - - / / / - with strong drugs dope me, with wise lies lure me, - / / / - - / / / - on black racks rack me, in blood-baths roll me. - / / / - - / / / -
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From the Wondering Minstrels mailing list, 1999–2008.
Kittjam · 7 June 2002
This poem is a very moving reflection, examining what it means to be human. It is great, partly because of the unusual perspective MacNeice has written from, and also because of the diverse range of both poetic and linguistic devices in the poem, all of which have been used very effectively to create the mood of the poem.
The image that the writer is not yet born creates a sense of innocence, and this enables MacNeice to speak of the corrupt nature of man in a powerful voice.
Sandra Gastaldi · 22 January 2005
Sorry, do you happen to know when exactly this poem was published? Thanks,
Sandra Gastaldi
pay.kat · 2 May 2005
It was written in London in 1944 during the Blitz.
kat brown
Dmdyson31 · 20 May 2005
well this is my favorate poem of all time, I was given a book when i was 14(every mans book of evergreen verse) because i love poetry and this was in it. I still know it by heart.
BRILLIANT!!!
Nicholas Griffiths · 5 October 2005
This poem is great, I havn’t read MacNeice before. I love the line “Let not the man who is beast or who thinks he is God come near me.”
nick
katherine Forwood · 10 May 2008
I love this dark poem that Louis MacNeice wrote during the Second World War