I'm not saying anything against Alexander
Timur, I hear, took the trouble to conquer the earth.
I don't understand him.
With a bit of hard liquor you can forget the earth.
I'm not saying anything against Alexander,
Only I have seen people who were remarkable,
Highly deserving of your admiration
For the fact that they were alive at all.
Great men generate too much sweat.
In all of this I see just a proof that
They couldn't stand being on their own
And smoking and drinking and the like.
And they must be too mean-spirited to get
Contentment from sitting by a woman.
Commentary
There is a program on BBC Radio 4, Sunday mornings at 6 a.m. called Something Understood. It seeks to be a rambling multi-faith, multi-(audio) medium session, exploring a given topic. It is rarely engrossing, often annoying, usually has something worth noting and every once in a while has something worth waking up for on a Sunday morning.
Last Sunday’s was entitled Feet of Clay. It included a sequence of poems, which worked together beautifully, written by Brecht, Kipling and Belloc.
I don’t think any of the three poems have appeared on WM and though Kipling and Belloc are represented on the site, there is no Brecht. In fact, I cannot find the Brecht anywhere. This presents a few difficulties:
1. I’m not sure it is a poem - maybe it is just lines from a play. No matter, it sounds like a poem.
2. Having failed to find it, I have had to transcribe it (I recorded the repeat on Sunday night). Inventing the line structure for a poem you have only ever heard is an interesting challenge - have a try.
3. Some of the words are wrong. I always have this problem with pop-songs - I can hum the tune but only guess at the words. I’m sure most are right in this case but real egg on face - the first word is almost certainly wrong. It sounded like “Timor” but the only reference I can find to Timor on the net is the island of East Timor. So it goes1.
On the poem itself, I agree almost completely with the sentiments and love two lines in particular - “Great men generate too much sweat” and the final sentence. Overall it is a fine complement to my favourite Shakespeare sonnet, “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun”. They are both saying that … well see for yourself.
— Nick
Minstrels Links
Poem #506, Lament for Zenocrate – Christopher Marlowe
Poem #44, My Mistress’ Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun (Sonnets CXXX) – William Shakespeare
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Brecht is almost certainly referring to the Mongol conqueror Timur (“born 1336, Kesh, near Samarkand, Transoxania [now in Uzbekistan]; died Feb 19, 1405, Otrar, near Chimkent [now Shymkent, Kazakstan]; also spelled Timour, byname Timur Lenk, or Timurlenk (Turkish: “Timur the Lame”), English Tamerlane, or Tamburlaine; Turkic conqueror of Islamic faith, chiefly remembered for the barbarity of his conquests from India and Russia to the Mediterranean Sea and for the cultural achievements of his dynasty.” – EB). t. ↩
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jmhogan · 6 October 2003
nice one nick. brecht wld have enjoyed it. but where is the original to be found? or is this it? all best wishes augustus young