The Waste Land (Part V)

T S Eliot

 V. What the Thunder Said

 Ganga was sunken, and the limp leaves
 Waited for rain, while the black clouds
 Gathered far distant, over Himavant.
 The jungle crouched, humped, in silence.
 Then spoke the thunder
 D A
 _Datta_: what have we given?
 My friend, blood shaking my heart
 The awful daring of a moment's surrender
 Which an age of prudence can never retract
 By this, and this only, we have existed
 Which is not to be found in our obituaries
 Or in memories draped by the beneficient spider
 Or under seals broken by the lean solicitor
 In our empty rooms
 D A
 _Dayadhvam_: I have heard the key
 Turn in the door once and turn once only
 We think of the key, each in his prison
 Only at nightfall, aethereal rumors
 Revive for a moment a broken Coriolanus
 D A
 _Damyata_: the boat responded
 Gaily, to the hand expert with the sail and oar
 The sea was calm, your heart would have responded
 Gaily, when invited, beating obedient
 To controlling hands

                                I sat upon a shore
 Fishing, with the arid plain behind me
 Shall I at least set my lands in order?
 London Bridge is falling down, falling down falling down
 _Poi s'ascose nel foco che li affina
 Quando fiam ut chelidon_ - O swallow swallow
 _Le Prince d'aquitaine à la tour abolie_
 These statements I have shored against my ruins
 Why then Ile fit you. Hieronymo's mad againe.
 Datta. Dayadhvam. Damyata.

              Shantih shantih shantih

Commentary

From “What the Thunder Said”, the fifth and final section of “The Waste

Land”, 1922.

Words and phrases surrounded by underscores are supposed to be in

italics.

These are the last, conclusive, lines of the “Waste Land”, which is a text

which often frightens the reader for the obscurity and complexity of its references. Yet, I think that, with just a few clues, the text can be fully enjoyed by any lover of poetry.

The “Waste Land” is the story of a journey or “Quest” that the man of the

early 20th century makes through the sterility and spiritual aridity of his modern world, until he arrives, in this final lines, at the Ganges, the sacred river, where, eventually, he finds some answers to his existential questions.

“Ganga”, the river Ganges is sunken. Water, a symbol of life and fertility

is scarce in the modern world, yet, here he hears the words of the thunder tThe voice of God according to many ancient religions). The thunder speaks Sanskrit, because Eliot goes back to the cradle of Western civilisation to the roots and the most vital source of Western culture. The Thunder-God repeats to man the three imperatives of the Upanishad, a Hindu sacred book:

        DATTA = give
        DAYADHVAM = co-operate, accept the others
        DAMYATA = control
 So the spiritual quest of the modern wanderer, the modern knight comes to

these ancient, elementary, basic precepts of life on which to rebuild a crumbled civilisation.

Yet, the poem does not finish on these three imperatives. Eliot now

introduces the image of the fisher, (which is reminiscent of many legends and myths: the Fisher King, King Arthur, Christ, and which represents Man in his best specifications); this man wants to reorganise his life, his kingdom, his future, saving something from the collapse of the ideals that he has witnessed. Of course, he saves poetry, (Dante, Latin literature, French poetry, Elizabethan drama) which contains those elements of the growth of the human soul that must not be lost. Probably, in this context, the last words, “Shantih shantih shantih” (which mean “peace” in Hindi, and which conclude the Upanishad), are, at the same time, a message, a farewell and an element of quotation from a consciously “poetic” text Eliot eminently loved.

I have certainly oversimplified things, but basically, starting from these

ideas, I think a reader can go deep further into the interpretation of the text and find a rich texture of references and suggestions.

— Cristina

Links

Poem #354, “The Waste Land (Part IV)”


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #858 · 4 August 2001

Guest poem submitted by Cristina Gazzieri

Fair use