Strawberries
There were never strawberries
like the ones we had
that sultry afternoon
sitting on the step
of the open french window
facing each other
your knees held in mine
the blue plates in our laps
the strawberries glistening
in the hot sunlight
we dipped them in sugar
looking at each other
not hurrying the feast
for one to come
the empty plates
laid on the stone together
with the two forks crossed
and I bent towards you
sweet in that air
in my arms
abandoned like a child
from your eager mouth
the taste of strawberries
in my memory
lean back again
let me love you
let the sun beat
on our forgetfulness
one hour of all
the heat intense
and summer lightning
on the Kilpatrick hills
let the storm wash the plates
Commentary
Sumer is icumen in, which means (in England, at least) Wimbledon, Ascot and the Ashes. Oh, and strawberries in cream - hence today’s choice of poem.
Truth to tell, though, the strawberries of the title are rather incidental to the poem, which is mostly about love, and memory, and experience. No, wait, I take that back: the strawberries may be incidental, but that’s entirely the point - the poem is about incidents, about the million and one little things that make life worth living. The events described may be just one story out of many, but they’re no less real and no less important for that.
— Thomas
[Minstrel Links]
The magic of the ordinary is a theme which runs through much of Edwin Morgan’s work; see, for instance, his justly celebrated “The Unspoken”, Minstrels Poem #147. See also Seamus Heaney’s “Song”, Minstrels Poem #61.
Morgan’s poetry also has a strong undercurrent of humour; see Minstrels
Poem #215, “The Loch Ness Monster’s Song”, and Minstrels Poem #304, “The Subway Piranhas”. I find his playfulness a welcome relief in an age where poets often take themselves all too seriously.
Finally, while we’re on the subject of berries, see William Carlos Williams’ equally evocative slice-of-life, “This Is Just To Say”, Minstrels Poem #274.