Astro-Gymnastics
Do-it-yourself grook
Go on a starlit night,
stand on your head,
leave your feet dangling
outwards into space,
and let the starry
firmament you tread
be, for the moment,
your elected base.
Feel Earth's colossal weight
of ice and granite,
of molten magma,
water, iron, and lead;
and briefly hold
this strangely solid planet
balanced upon
your strangely solid head.
Commentary
Today’s grook is rather atypical, in that it is not particularly epigrammatic, pithy or aphoristic. However, it does share in the other main quality that most of the grooks possess - it reveals Hein’s delightfully quirky sense of play, to say nothing of his keen perception and his occasional trick of deftly turning established ideas on their heads.
The paradigm shift is handled beautifully - from the initial ‘leave your feet dangling outwards into space’ to the wonderful image in the last four lines, I can not just visualise but almost feel what he means. Definitely one of my favourite grooks, despite its unconventional nature.
Links
We’ve run one other grook: poem #668
The comments to which also contain a biography
http://www.powerweb.net/playandlive/piethein.htm
and a bunch of other links.
— Martin