In the Quiet Night

Li Po

 The floor before my bed is bright:
 Moonlight - like hoarfrost - in my room.
 I lift my head and watch the moon.
 I drop my head and think of home.

Commentary

Translated by Vikram Seth.

I came across this poem years ago in Seth’s volume “Three Chinese Poets” which I began reading more from a love of Seth than any great interest in Chinese poetry. What I love about this poem is its sparseness, something that Li Po shares with other Chinese poets, and which I think has to do with a culture where emotional restraint is encouraged. Yet this quatrain is an example of just how much loneliness can hide behind a facade of serenity. The poem resembles the Chinese script itself - a minutely detailed painting brought to life with a few deft strokes.

— Purnima

Minstrels Links

Poems by Li Po:
Poem #70, “The River-Merchant’s Wife: A Letter”
Poem #504, “About Tu Fu”
Poem #683, “To Tu Fu from Shantung”
Poem #749, “Parting”
(Note that the first of these is credited to Ezra Pound on the Minstrels website, since it’s as much Pound’s work as Po’s).

Poems by Vikram Seth:
Poem #650, “All You Who Sleep Tonight”
Poem #754, “Protocols”
Poem #460, “Round and Round”

Seth’s “Three Chinese Poets” (which, sadly, I do not have the good fortune to possess) includes translations of Wang Wei, Tu Fu (whose name Seth transliterates as Du Fu) and Li Po (ditto, Li Bai).


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #794 · 28 May 2001

Guest poem submitted by Purnima Sreenivas

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