Theology
"No, the serpent did not
Seduce Eve to the apple.
All that's simply
Corruption of the facts.
Adam ate the apple.
Eve ate Adam.
The serpent ate Eve.
This is the dark intestine.
The serpent, meanwhile,
Sleeps his meal off in Paradise -
Smiling to hear
God's querulous calling."
Commentary
In the spirit of submitting poems about religion. This is one I find particularly impressive because of the unflinching directness with which it’s written - which is what keeps it from being more than just a momentary witticism. I specially love the incredible sense of despair that grips me everytime I read the lines ‘This is the dark intestine’ - because with that one line Hughes simply kills the laughter of the previous three (and is it just my imagination or is there a suggestion of the long geneologies of the Genesis in them) and suddenly plunges us into a sort of minor key, a note of unrelieved blackness. Philosophically, it’s not that profound a poem, but what makes it special is that despite this it sort of feels right.
— Aseem
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From the Wondering Minstrels mailing list, 1999–2008.
Christiane Schwind · 29 June 2002
Yes. I feel that much of the power of the line of the “dark intestine” comes from its double sense - it seems to say “that’s where, or what, we are - this dark intestine” as well as “this is the dark, grimy, intestinal truth.”
Christiane