Vergissmeinnicht

Keith Douglas

 Three weeks gone and the combatants gone
 returning over the nightmare ground
 we found the place again, and found
 the soldier sprawling in the sun.

 The frowning barrel of his gun
 overshadowing. As we came on
 that day, he hit my tank with one
 like the entry of a demon.

 Look. Here in the gunpit spoil
 the dishonoured picture of his girl
 who has put: Steffi. Vergissmeinnicht.
 in a copybook gothic script.

 We see him almost with content,
 abased, and seeming to have paid
 and mocked at by his own equipment
 that's hard and good when he's decayed.

 But she would weep to see today
 how on his skin the swart flies move;
 the dust upon the paper eye
 and the burst stomach like a cave.

 For here the lover and killer are mingled
 who had one body and one heart.
 And death who had the soldier singled
 has done the lover mortal hurt.

Commentary

Vergissmeinnicht means “forget me not” in German.

The phrase ‘War Poets’ usually calls to mind names such as those of Wilfred Owen, Siegfried Sassoon, and their contemporaries from the First World War (the ‘Great War’, as it was called in its immediate aftermath); although the Second World War did produce its share of important poems, most of them were written at some remove from the trenches (the work of Empson and Auden springs to mind) (cue a flood of emails from Minstrels subscribers pointing out my ignorance of WW2 poetry). Douglas is the exception: like Owen, he distinguished himself on the front lines (thus achieving a moral stature which enabled him to criticize the carnage around him); like Owen, his poetry has a universality which speaks to readers removed from its immediate context; and like Owen, he was killed in action.

Douglas’ verse itself, though, is quite different from Owen’s; where the latter is a blend of (barely-restrained) outrage and compassion, the former’s “unquiet intensity” has been compared to the Metaphysicals - detached and clinical on the surface1, yet deeply thought-out and meaning-laden. “Vergissmeinnicht” is an excellent (if somewhat over-anthologized) example of this… the final couplet, especially, is justly celebrated for its encapsulation of the paradox of war.

— Thomas

Biography

b. January 20, 1920, Royal Tunbridge Wells, Kent, England d. June 9, 1944, Normandy, France

British poet who is remembered for his irony, eloquence, and fine control in expressing the misery and waste of war, to which he was to fall victim.

Douglas’ education at Oxford University was cut short by the outbreak of war. By 1941 he was serving as a tank commander in North Africa, where some of his most powerful poems were written (Alamein to Zem-Zem, 1946). He was moved back to Britain in 1944 to take part in the D-Day invasion; he fell in combat in Normandy on his third day there. His posthumous Collected Poems (1951) enhanced his reputation as a war poet, but in 1964 Ted Hughes’s edition of Douglas’ Selected Poems established him as a poet of universal significance.

– EB

Links

See poem #707 for a list of
other war poems; don’t miss the ones by Wilfred Owen, especially.

  1. Michael Schmidt quips that for Douglas, “the poetry is in the pitilessness”, reversing Owen’s famous comment on his own work, which you can read at poem #132 ↩


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #710 · 26 February 2001

Poem selected by Abraham Thomas

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