Lay of Ancient Rome
Oh, the Roman was a rogue,
He erat was, you bettum;
He ran his automobilis
And smoked his cigarettum;
He wore a diamond studibus
And elegant cravattum,
A maxima cum laude shirt,
And a stylish hattum!
He loved the luscious hic-haec-hoc,
And bet on games and equi;
At times he won, at others, though,
He got it in the necqui;
He winked (quo usque tandem?)
At puellas on the Forum,
And sometimes even made
Those goo-goo oculorum!
He frequently was seen
At combats gladiatorial,
And ate enough to feed
Ten boarders at Memorial;
He often went on sprees
And said, on starting homus,
"Hic labor --- opus est,
Oh, where's my hic--hic--domus?"
Although he lived in Rome --
Of all the arts the middle --
He was (excuse the phrase)
A horrid individ'l;
Ah! what a diff'rent thing
Was the homo (dative, hominy)
Of far-away B.C.
From us of Anno Domini.
Commentary
I wish I had found this poem a week ago…
“Quiquid latine dictum sit altum viditur” - whatever is said in Latin sounds profound <grin>. Well, not always, as today’s poem makes clear. A neat little follow-up to Martin’s theme of last week: patchy in parts, but very entertaining in sum.
— Thomas
Notes
Bettum, automobilis, cigarettum, studibus, cravattum, hattum, necqui, homus - are all pseudo-Latin, as is the word ‘pseudo-Latin’ itself. (self-reference, anyone?).
“erat” - a pun on ‘a rat’.
“maxima cum laude” - with the maximum distinction (compare ‘magna cum laude’, with great distinction, and ‘summa cum laude’, with the highest distinction). Used usually in the context of graduation. Note the pun on ‘laundered’.
“hic-haec-hoc” - a reminiscence of grammar exercises while studying Latin cases, but also a clever pun on (drunken) hiccoughs and hock (slang for cheap liquor).
“equi” - horses.
“domus” - unlike ‘homus’ above, ‘domus’ actually does mean ‘home’.
“puellas” - wenches.
“forum” - ‘the marketplace or public place of an ancient Roman city forming the center of judicial and public business’ [Merriam-Webster]. The modern meaning derives from this.
“oculorum” - eye
“quo usque tandem?” - the opening phrase from Cicero’s first oration to Catiline. The full sentence is, “Quo usque tandem abutere, Catilina, patientia nostra?” - “How long, oh Catiline, will you abuse our patience?”. The entirety is a masterpiece of rhetoric - not for nothing is Cicero considered the greatest orator of all time. O tempora, o mores!
“Hic labor — opus est” - a take on Virgil, the Aeneid, book VI, where the Sybil tells Aeneas:
"Facilis descensus Averno;
noctes atque dies patet atri ianua Ditis;
sed revocare gradum superasque evadere ad auras,
hoc opus, hic labor est.
In Robert Fitzgerald’s beautiful translation,
“The way downward is easy from Avernus. Black Dis’s door stands open night and day. But to retrace your steps to heaven’s air, There is the trouble, there is the toil.”
Avernus is ‘the burning lake’, and Dis is another name for Pluto, God of the Underworld. The phrase also appears in Ovid.
“homo” - short for Homo sapiens - Man, the Wise (!).
“(dative, hominy)” - Latin words change their form based on their case; schoolchildren studying Latin therefore have to memorize various inflections and declensions, such as dative, possessive, ablative and so on… needless to say, ‘hominy’ has nothing to do with ‘homo’; instead, it means “kernels of corn that have been soaked in a caustic solution (as of lye) and then washed to remove the hulls” [Merriam-Webster], as in ‘hominy grits’.
“Anno Domini” - literally, the Year of Our Lord; colloquially used to refer to ‘modern times’.
Moreover
Thomas Ybarra’s only other claim to fame (insofar as Google is concerned) is that he was the originator of the following aphorism: “A Christian is a man who feels repentance on Sunday for what he did on Saturday and is going to do on Monday”.
[Administrivia and Gloatitude]
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