There Will Come Soft Rains
There will come soft rains and the smell of the ground,
And swallows circling with their shimmering sound;
And frogs in the pools singing at night,
And wild plum trees in tremulous white;
Robins will wear their feathery fire,
Whistling their whims on a low fence-wire;
And not one will know of the war, not one
Will care at last when it is done.
Not one would mind, neither bird nor tree,
If mankind perished utterly;
And Spring herself, when she woke at dawn
Would scarcely know that we were gone.
Commentary
This is probably Teasdale’s best-known poem, though, I feel, more for the message than because it stands out as a poem. The notion that Man is rushing headlong towards his own destruction is one that has embedded itself in the racial consciousness ever since Hiroshima, and one that neither the cold war nor an ever increasing sense of future shock have done anything to dispel.
Of course, one of the first writers to spring to mind is Bradbury, who has written a number of stories on the theme, one of them1 based explicitly on the poem. However, there is a significant difference to be noted. Bradbury’s stories - and, indeed, those of a score of other sf writers - all convey a profound sense of tragedy, of loss; which, of course, is hardly surprising.
Teasdale, on the other hand, manages to convey a sense of detachment, even indifference. Indeed, one feels, the earth will neither know nor care that mankind has come and gone. And that may be, in the final analysis, the most disturbing prospect of all.
http://home.earthlink.net/~hiflyer/APbradbury/twcsr.htm for an analysis of the story
Biography etc
See the previous Teasdale poem, Morning, poem #113
— Martin
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‘There Will Come Soft Rains’; see ↩
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Brenden Matthews · 28 February 2002
see “There will come soft rains” by Ray Bradbury from Adventures in Tomorrow, Greenberg publisher, New York, 1951
TIEKEY THE BABY · 23 March 2003
can I have permission to repost
ToniDuAZ · 3 February 2004
I have always loved this poem. Being of the nuclear war generation, it always gives me peace to think that there is the possibility that even if man were to annihilate man, perhaps the earth would only just sigh momentarily with our passing and some type of Eden would exist without our chaos. This of course precludes nuclear winter etc.
Toni
R K ROBERTS · 31 March 2005
its a great poem