The Day Flies Off Without Me
The planes bound for all points everywhere
etch lines on my office window. From the top floor
London recedes in all directions, and beyond:
the world with its teeming hearts.
I am still, you move, I am a point of reference on a map;
I am at zero meridian as you consume the longitudes.
The pact we made to read our farewells exactly
at two in the afternoon with you in the air
holds me like a heavy winter coat.
Your unopened letter is in my pocket, beating.
Commentary
I love the quiet strength of this powerful piece. It speaks volumes about an unrequited love in a way that is neither sappy, nor reflective. It just “is” and seems to convey “This is how it is, and that is so”. Every once in a while, a poet creates something so heartfelt that all his/her other poems pale in comparison. This is one of those pieces. ‘nuff said.
— Hemant
Links
Biography
http://uk.poetryinternationalweb.org/piw_cms/cms/cms_module/index.php?obj_id=6964