The Day Flies Off Without Me

John Stammers

 The planes bound for all points everywhere
 etch lines on my office window. From the top floor
 London recedes in all directions, and beyond:
 the world with its teeming hearts.

 I am still, you move, I am a point of reference on a map;
 I am at zero meridian as you consume the longitudes.
 The pact we made to read our farewells exactly
 at two in the afternoon with you in the air
 holds me like a heavy winter coat.

 Your unopened letter is in my pocket, beating.

Commentary

I love the quiet strength of this powerful piece. It speaks volumes about an unrequited love in a way that is neither sappy, nor reflective. It just “is” and seems to convey “This is how it is, and that is so”. Every once in a while, a poet creates something so heartfelt that all his/her other poems pale in comparison. This is one of those pieces. ‘nuff said.

— Hemant

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The Wondering Minstrels, poem #1960 · 20 December 2006

Guest poem submitted by Hemant Mohapatra

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