Simplify Me When I'm Dead
Remember me when I am dead
Simplify me when I am dead.
As the process of earth
strip off the colour and the skin
take the brown hair and the blue eye
and leave me simpler than at birth,
when hairless I came howling in
as the moon came in the cold sky.
Of my skeleton perhaps
so stripped, a learned man may say
"He was of such a type and intelligence," no more.
Thus when in a year collapse
particular memories, you may
deduce from the long pain I bore
the opinion I held, who was my foe
and what I left, even my appearance
but incidents will be no guide.
Time's wrong way telescope will show
a minute man the years hence
and by distance simplified.
Through the lens see if I seem
substance or nothing: of the world
deserving mention or charitable oblivion
not by momentary spleen
or love into decision hurled
leisurely arrive at an opinion.
Remember me when I am dead
and simplify me when I am dead.
Commentary
Here’s a poem that I first read in high school and which spurred my consequent obsession with poetry. The reason I really like Keith Douglas is because of his rawness of emotion. It is almost as if his poems document the very moment when a truth must have become evident to him. It is possible that this is so because all we have are his early works – lacking the maturity or perhaps, the practice that comes with age, due to his untimely death.
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swati chaudhary
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