Breakfast
He poured the coffee
Into the cup
He poured the milk
Into the cup of coffee
He added the sugar
To the coffee and milk
He stirred it
With a teaspoon
He drank the coffee
And put back the cup
Without speaking to me
He lit a cigarette
He blew some rings
With the smoke
He flicked the ashes
Into the ashtray
Without speaking to me
Without looking at me
He got up
He put his hat
On his head
He put on
His raincoat
Because it was raining
He went out
Into the rain
Without a word
Without looking at me
And I
I took my head
In my hands
And I wept
Commentary
(translated by Alastair Campbell)
Jacques Prévert is one of France’s most well-known poets, and I was surprised to see him so well represented on minstrels ;)
The thing I love about him is his remarkable obervation of and sympathy for people and everyday life. He evokes deep emotions with suprising simplicity and grace. The poem “Breakfast” published in Paroles, Prévert’s first collection of poetry which appeared late in 1945, is typical of his lucid and poignant style.
— Firdaus
Martin adds
As an aside, I’d like to thank reader Ian Barnett (of the Parole Translations and Literary Agency) for drumming into me the importance of finding out about and acknowledging the translators of non-English poems we run. I don’t always succeed, I’ll admit, but I do always make the effort. Quoting Ian’s spot-on rant about this all-too-common omission:
This lacuna annexes foreign poets to the English language in a most unwholesome, if reflexive, nay, automatic way. It does the invisible profession of the literary translator no favours either. And strictly it is illegal not to acknowledge provenance – a law which, for the authorship of the translator, is also strangely invisible.
— Martin
Links
Wikipedia entry:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pr%C3%A9vert
A collection of Prévert’s poems, translated by Campbell:
http://www.otago.ac.nz/DeepSouth/vol3no1/campbell.html
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Lucija Jenel · 15 September 2006
beautiful angst
John K. Taber · 15 September 2006
And I, for one, would like to see the original French. Prévert’s language is demotic, I understand, and this poem in particular would come across well in demotic French.
And yes, it is very important to respect copyrights and translations.
Petra Sonderegger · 16 September 2006
Hi Martin,
I found a French copy at
[broken link] http://humwww.ucsc.edu/gweltaz/courses/french/poems/dejeuner.html (just in case you want to post the original for the francophiles out there…)
Cheers,
Petra