A Green Crab's Shell
Not, exactly, green:
closer to bronze
preserved in kind brine,
something retrieved
from a Greco-Roman wreck,
patinated and oddly
muscular. We cannot
know what his fantastic
legs were like--
though evidence
suggests eight
complexly folded
scuttling works
of armament, crowned
by the foreclaws'
gesture of menace
and power. A gull's
gobbled the center,
leaving this chamber
--size of a demitasse--
open to reveal
a shocking, Giotto blue.
Though it smells
of seaweed and ruin,
this little traveling case
comes with such lavish lining!
Imagine breathing
surrounded by
the brilliant rinse
of summer's firmament.
What color is
the underside of skin?
Not so bad, to die,
if we could be opened
into this--
if the smallest chambers
of ourselves,
similarly,
revealed some sky.
Commentary
I like Doty’s straightforward, almost stream-of-consciousness style - he eschews stylistic tricks in favour of saying what he has to say, but his language is precise and exquisite for all that, and his poems thoughtful and revealing. Today’s is a good example - the crab shell is described in beautiful detail, with an engaged subjectivity that reinforces its comparison to a work of art (note, also, the whole life-imitating-art inversion), and the segue into a more personal musing feels perfectly natural.
And I love the ending, with its suggestion of an Escherian worlds-within-worlds landscape - indeed, it was that image that made me pick this poem out of a collection of Doty’s works to run here.
— Martin
Links
We’ve run one of Doty’s poems before, the exquisite Broadway [Poem #1175]:
Poem #1175
Biography
http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/Mark-Doty
Wikipedia entry:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mark_Doty