Well I Remember
Well I remember how you smiled
To see me write your name upon
The soft sea-sand-'O! what a child!
You think you're writing upon stone!'
I have since written what no tide
Shall ever wash away, what men
Unborn shall read o'er ocean wide
And find Ianthe's name again.
Commentary
Yesterday’s Spenser made me think of this other version of the ‘not marble, nor the gilded monuments’ theme. (Milosz writes: “It’s hard to guess where that pride of poets comes from”). What I like about Landor is how quickly he cuts to the chase - this is not some lengthy meditation on art and immortality, this is the poem as an act of schoolboy vanity, the very arrogance of the claim founded in a deep insecurity, in the memory of being laughed at, of not being taken seriously.
It is also, a more intensely personal poem, more intimate and somehow more pathetic. Plus I love the sequence of thought that connects ‘no tide shall ever wash away’ to ‘read o’er ocean wide’. This is not, in my view, a great poem, but it is an interesting take on an age old theme.
— Aseem
P.S. A note on the text. The text (and title) here comes from bartleby. My edition of the Penguin Book of English Verse titles this poem Ianthe (which is misleading, I think, because Landor has a number of poems with that title) and has a slightly different text:
WELL I remember how you smiled
To see me write your name upon
The soft sea-sand...'O! what a child!
You think you're writing upon stone!'
I have since written what no tide
Shall ever wash away, what men
Unborn shall read o'er ocean wide
And find Ianthe's name agen.