Sestina
September rain falls on the house.
In the failing light, the old grandmother
sits in the kitchen with the child
beside the Little Marvel Stove,
reading the jokes from the almanac,
laughing and talking to hide her tears.
She thinks that her equinoctial tears
and the rain that beats on the roof of the house
were both foretold by the almanac,
but only known to the grandmother.
The iron kettle sings on the stove.
She cuts some bread and says to the child,
It’s time for tea now; but the child
is watching the teakettle’s small hard tears
dance like mad on the hot black stove,
the way the rain must dance on the house.
Tidying up, the old grandmother
hangs up the clever almanac
on its string. Birdlike, the almanac
hovers half open above the child,
hovers above the old grandmother
and her teacup full of dark brown tears.
She shivers and says she thinks the house
feels chilly, and puts more wood in the stove.
It was to be, says the Marvel Stove.
I know what I know, says the almanac.
With crayons the child draws a rigid house
and a winding pathway. Then the child
puts in a man with buttons like tears
and shows it proudly to the grandmother.
But secretly, while the grandmother
busies herself about the stove,
the little moons fall down like tears
from between the pages of the almanac
into the flower bed the child
has carefully placed in the front of the house.
Time to plant tears, says the almanac.
The grandmother sings to the marvelous stove
and the child draws another inscrutable house.
Commentary
I was amazed to discover that Minstrels had never run this poem.
Like it says, it’s a sestina; Minstrels has run a couple before, notably the awesome Shrinking Lonesome Sestina by Miller Williams [Poem #904]. There’s an explanation of the form there; if that’s not enough for you, you could also try googling “sestina”, which will send you to all kinds of sites that’ll have you writing them in no time.
I love this one because it uses the form so gloriously. Look at the six key words: house, grandmother, child, stove, almanac, tears. Five homey, mundane, comforting, cozy words, and “tears”. That choice right there tells you that there’s something going on beneath the surface, that not all is right with the world of grandmother and child and crayons and tea. After the second stanza, the tears aren’t even literal, but we’re still seeing other things (the rain, the tea, the moon figures in the almanac, seeds) likened to tears. There’s an all-pervasive sadness there, even though the surface imagery of the poem is so very cheery and homey.
And the relationship between grandmother and child is captured so beautifully, too.
Classic Elizabeth Bishop; you wouldn’t mistake it for anyone else.
–Mark