An Apology

F J Bergmann

 Forgive me
 for backing over
 and smashing
 your red wheelbarrow.

 It was raining
 and the rear wiper
 does not work on
 my new plum-colored SUV.

 I am also sorry
 about the white
 chickens.

Commentary

I was leafing through one of Billy Collins’s anthologies of contemporary American poetry (“180 More: Extraordinary Poems for Every Day”) when I ran into this. I love the haiku-like simplicity of the lines, and the random irreverent touches (“plum-colored SUV”, “white chickens”). So spare, not a word out of place, and one gets such a clear and vivid picture of the event when reading it.

“An Apology” was a finalist for the 2003 James Hearst Poetry Prize and appeared in The North American Review Vol. 288, No. 2.

Frances Jean Bergmann is a web designer and artist. She reads at spoken word venues, and has been published in Margie-The American Journal of Poetry, Wind, Pavement Saw, Realpoetik,in the anthology Connected: Poetry Online In The Age Of Computers, in her own chapbooks, and has a poem included in 180 More (Random House 2005). In 2003 she received the Mary Roberts Rinehart National Poetry Award; in 2004 she won the Pauline Ellis Prose Poetry Prize with “Wall.” She lives in Madison, Wisconsin (USA), and maintains several local poetry websites.

Biographical information from:
http://www.madpoetry.org/madpoets/bergmann.html
http://www.wfop.org/poets/bergmann.html
http://www.fibitz.com/biostate.html

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PS. Here’s the original:
Poem #83


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #1759 · 9 September 2005

Guest poem submitted by Paramjit Oberoi

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Nora Ghaoui · 23 July 2006

This poem reminds me of another William Carlos Williams poem (This Is Just To Say) more than it does of The Red Wheelbarrow. The first line, “Forgive me” is in both poems, plus the reference to plums.