Nonadaptation

Czeslaw Milosz

 I was not made to live anywhere except in Paradise.

 Such, simply, was my genetic inadaptation.

 Here on earth every prick of a rose-thorn changed into a wound.
 whenever the sun hid behind a cloud, I grieved.

 I pretended to work like others from morning to evening,
 but I was absent, dedicated to invisible countries.

 For solace I escaped to city parks, there to observe
 and faithfully describe flowers and trees, but they changed,
 under my hand, into the gardens of Paradise.

 I have not loved a woman with my five senses.
 I only wanted from her my sister, from before the banishment.

 And I respected religion, for on this earth of pain
 it was a funereal and a propitiatory song.

Commentary

As a statement of intent, and as a memorable first line, Milosz makes things very clear by saying “I was not made to live anywhere except in Paradise”. Yet in typical Milosz style, what follows is NOT a funny, escapist take on life. Instead we’re treated to 13 lines of intelligent, memorable poetry.

It amuses me that whenever I quote from this poem, I tend to choose the light hearted lines (“I pretended to work like others from morning to evening, but I was absent, dedicated to invisible countries.”).. and people naturally assume that it’s from a funny poem. Talk of taking a quote out of context !

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— Sarah Korah


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #1731 · 11 July 2005

Guest poem submitted by Sarah Korah

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rebeccathomas · 11 July 2005

Thank you Sarah for sending this poem in. Milosz has put into words what most of us feel. RT