We Should Talk about This Problem
There is a Beautiful Creature
Living in a hole you have dug.
So at night
I set fruit and grains
And little pots of wine and milk
Beside your soft earthen mounds,
And I often sing.
But still, my dear,
You do not come out.
I have fallen in love with Someone
Who hides inside you.
We should talk about this problem---
Otherwise,
I will never leave you alone.
Commentary
Such a beguiling poem. It calls out to you with such patient, laughing tenderness that the proud and frightened creature somewhere inside lifts its small head in helpless confusion and wonder - this then the beginning of the end - of glittery-eyed guardedness and a long lack of faith. A fierce loneliness that must finally give way to love’s kindness too sweetly intentioned to be condescension. How scandalously fond I have grown of this Sufi poet-saint whose name is Hafiz - and to think we only just met. I like his willingness to confront the seeming stuck-ness of the situation with such a sly, reproachful twinkle. I like the gentle humour of the understated title suggestion: ‘We should talk about this problem.’ …And I particularly love the conclusion - for the caressing determination of its exquisite threat.
— pavi
Links
There’s a biography attached to Poem #447.
http://www.hafizonlove.com/ is a nicely done site with a lot of information