Afternoons
Summer is fading:
The leaves fall in ones and twos
From trees bordering
The new recreation ground.
In the hollows of afternoons
Young mothers assemble
At swing and sandpit
Setting free their children.
Behind them, at intervals,
Stand husbands in skilled trades,
An estateful of washing,
And the albums, lettered
Our Wedding, lying
Near the television:
Before them, the wind
Is ruining their courting-places
That are still courting-places
(But the lovers are all in school),
And their children, so intent on
Finding more unripe acorns,
Expect to be taken home.
Their beauty has thickened.
Something is pushing them
To the side of their own lives.
Commentary
I came across this poem in the Philip Larkin site1 and really liked the images captured so neatly in this poem, especially the last stanza. It is one of those ‘snapshots in time’ where the passage of time has been brought out very vividly. This poem was a part of his widely acclaimed ‘The Whitsun Weddings’ collection.
Larkin is a heavily represented poet on Minstrels, so I have nothing further to add by way of biography.
— Anita
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Jhan Si · 9 January 2005
i have this poem as a self study assignment. can you please send in more details about it and also a few contemporary criticisms on it?