The Shipfitter's Wife
I loved him most
when he came home from work,
his fingers still curled from fitting pipe,
his denim shirt ringed with sweat
and smelling of salt, the drying weeds
of the ocean. I would go to him where he sat
on the edge of the bed, his forehead
anointed with grease, his cracked hands
jammed between his thighs, and unlace
the steel-toed boots, stroke his ankles,
his calves, the pads and bones of his feet.
Then I'd open his clothes and take
the whole day inside me -- the ship's
gray sides, the miles of copper pipe,
the voice of the first man clanging
off the hull's silver ribs, spark of lead
kissing metal, the clamp, the winch,
the white fire of the torch, the whistle
and the long drive home.
Commentary
I first came across Dorianne Laux when I read ‘The Shipfitter’s Wife’. The poem inspired me enough to check out other poems written by her. She has an ability to capture magic out of daily humdrum events and write about them with an astonishing amount of honesty which I have rarely seen anywhere else. Her poems cover love, loss, death in simple yet extremely vivid and evocative language.
I haven’t seen any of her poems on this list, so I thought I would submit a few of them.
— Deepali