Rose, Oh Pure Contradiction, Joy
Rose, oh pure contradiction, joy
of being No-one's sleep, under so
many lids.
Commentary
(translation by Stephen Mitchell)
Notes: This is Rilke’s self-composed epitaph; in the original German:
Rose, oh reiner Widerspruch, Lust
Niemandes Sclaf zu sein unter soviel
Lidern.
The Tanith Lee poem [Poem #1366] reminded me of today’s poem by Rilke.
“Lidern” could be a pun on “Lieder”, songs, poems. Lips like roses is a cliche, but lips like rose petals, clinically precise, a matter of texture not color, isn’t.
— Tim
Martin adds
I find the line breaks in this poem confusing - could someone who speaks German tell me whether they’re more natural in the original?
Links
Another translation, and a biography:
[broken link] http://www.geocities.com/Paris/LeftBank/4027/bio.html