River

Joni Mitchell

 It's coming on Christmas
 They're cutting down trees
 They're putting up reindeer
 And singing songs of joy and peace
 Oh I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on
 But it don't snow here
 It stays pretty green
 I'm going to make a lot of money
 Then I'm going to quit this crazy scene
 I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on
 I wish I had a river so long
 I would teach my feet to fly
 Oh I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on
 I made my baby cry

 He tried hard to help me
 You know, he put me at ease
 And he loved me so naughty
 Made me weak in the knees
 Oh I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on
 I'm so hard to handle
 I'm selfish and I'm sad
 Now I've gone and lost the best baby
 That I ever had
 Oh I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on
 I wish I had a river so long
 I would teach my feet to fly
 Oh I wish I had a river
 I made my baby say goodbye

 It's coming on Christmas
 They're cutting down trees
 They're putting up reindeer
 And singing songs of joy and peace
 I wish I had a river
 I could skate away on

Commentary

One of my favourite Christmas songs and one that I’m always haunted by in this season (i’ve been wandering around humming it for three days now). There’s something so heartbreaking about the refrain that hearing it again and again you can feel yourself almost lifted on wings of sorrow and loneliness and longing. I think it’s an incredible example of how one simple yet beautiful line, repeated again and again can be more eloquent than all the passionate verse in the world (the only thing I can compare it to is Neruda: Tonight I can write the saddest lines). To really appreciate it you need to hear the song of course, because there’s Joni Mitchell’s incredible voice to accompany it, but I think even by themselves the lyrics are brilliant.

So here’s hoping that the new year brings us all the rivers we’ve been dreaming of.

Merry Christmas,

— Aseem


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #1409 · 25 December 2003

Guest poem submitted by Aseem Kaul

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