Even If You Grab A Piece of Time
Conjure something glowing
Take this day
You were born with hands for spinning
Talent for dreams and making them real
Roll the hours like yarn
Spin something that makes you feel full
And big and open to talk
Make this day your own square
In your own life quilt
So shining it brighten the whole of your years
This far
Make this day like one of God's seven.
Commentary
A friend met this poet at a conference and bought one of her books. “You’ll like her,” he said, and I opened the slim volume feeling predictable and curious. Had never heard of Forman before but some of her poetry felt like an old, old friend. I like this poet even at the cost of being predictable. She shines real with love and human-ness. This one was my favorite, it’s one of those poems that picks you up if you’re down and shakes you firmly and enchantingly out of your own excuses for not carpe-ing the diem. “Conjure something glowing” An irresistible invitation into this poem, this day, this life…
Lilies-of-the-field no toil, no spin. Un-aspiring and splendid…and what of us? Blessed with a beauty beyond lilies we work and dream - or Can. A loving urgency in this poem pointing us to the potential within not just the hours but ourselves. Homespun imagery makes her words comfortable, familiar - themselves a handmade quilt thrown across the page warm and deep and spirit-lifting (quilts are wonderful things. poems can be too.) Pick up the colored ‘shreds and patches’ of your life, and stitch the mystery and the mundanity into something meaningful and alive. When she puts it like that how do you decline? It’s hard if not impossible. “Make this day like one of God’s seven.”
An order, a dare, a mantra …an inspiration. And now if you’ll excuse me I’m going to go carpe what’s left of the diem.
— pavi
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From the Wondering Minstrels mailing list, 1999–2008.
Deepak Srinivasan · 23 November 2003
its funny, that on a night when i just listened to pink floyd’s “hey you” and then this poem juxtaposed. the emotions they each conjure (sorry for stealing) are like oil and water and the pessimist in me says that the oil of “hey you” will drop like a thud while the lightness of “….a piece of time” will vanish so ethereally. in any case. a beautiful poem matched by equally wonderful commentary. “caper on a dime” on. thanks much.
/Deepak
Deepak Srinivasan · 23 November 2003
its funny, that on a night when i just listened to pink floyd’s “hey you” and then this poem juxtaposed. the emotions they each conjure (sorry for stealing) are like oil and water and the pessimist in me says that the oil of “hey you” will drop like a thud while the lightness of “….a piece of time” will vanish so ethereally. in any case. a beautiful poem matched by equally wonderful commentary. “caper on a dime” on. thanks much. /Deepak
Beverly Sullivan · 20 January 2004
I just attended a poetry reading by Ruth Forman and loved listening to her read her works. She has a rhythm that captivates your soul….I can still hear her voice in my head….I look forward to her continued work.
Bev Sullivan