To My Wife - With A Copy Of My Poems
I can write no stately proem
As a prelude to my lay;
From a poet to a poem
I would dare to say.
For if of these fallen petals
One to you seem fair,
Love will waft it till it settles
On your hair.
And when wind and winter harden
All the loveless land,
It will whisper of the garden,
You will understand.
Commentary
Vikram Doctor writes “For no particularly clear reasons, today’s poem [Poem #1225] made me think of three others, each quite different, but well worth carrying on the list.”
I agree - the poems are very different, and yet all connected in some way to Flecker’s poem; they form a nice theme. So, back to Vikram, with the first of his poems:
proem: An introduction; a preface
The first was by Oscar Wilde, a very simple and delicate poem to his wife. Its not very much, and in less sure hands could be too mawkish or pretty. But Wilde gets the balance just right, and the result is a poem which I read just casually once, but its always stayed with me.
— Vikram
Martin adds
As Vikram says, the poem has a very light, delicate touch - I was reminded in places of Teasdale. What particularly struck me was the way it kept getting better with every line - it starts off conventionally enough, but by the time it gets to the last verse, it is evident that Wilde has painted a softly beautiful image with a few, precise strokes; and the last line is quietly and hauntingly perfect.
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Jenny Kirkby · 15 April 2003
What a lovely poem! I hope that, since wind and winter did indeed harden on both their lives, that she found it some comfort, and remembered, and understood.
Jenny
Don José · 16 April 2003
The statement is in the subjunctive mood (indicated by the “if”), and thus takes the seemingly plural “seem.” It’s the same mood as when one says “If I were…” instead of “If I was….”
DJ (anal, if not uptight)
Acynta · 16 April 2003
I find this confusing:
“For if of these fallen petals,
one to you seem fair, …”
Shouldn’t it be “seems fair”, as “one” is the subject, not “petals”? Is this a typo?
Sorry to be uptight.
carlynn
A E Smith JP · 22 October 2004
Three small verses, yet I think a good writer could couch a book, yet still have energy to unravel the mysteries contained therein