On Being Asked to Write a Poem Against the War in Vietnam
Well I have and in fact
more than one and I'll
tell you this too
I wrote one against
Algeria that nightmare
and another against
Korea and another
against the one
I was in
and I don't remember
how many against
the three
when I was a boy
Abyssinia Spain and
Harlan County
and not one
breath was restored
to one
shattered throat
mans womans or childs
not one not
one
but death went on and on
never looking aside
except now and then
with a furtive half-smile
to make sure I was noticing.
Commentary
Poems on war sometimes seem so useless and uncalled for, like flinging bits of confetti at this pitiless juggernaut. This poem sort of captures that, right from the throwaway tone it begins with to the bland monstrousness of the end.
— Amulya
Martin adds
This is indeed a brilliant poem, but its very brilliance serves to mask an underlying fallacy. The purpose of war poetry is not so much to “restore breath to one shattered throat”, but to show people what exactly war is, in a way that the safely sanitised capsules delivered by newspapers and television cannot or do not. “The pity of war, the pity war distilled” needs to be adequately conveyed to the populace-at-large, and I submit that poets, as much as anyone else, have served to counteract the “dulce et decorum est” blood-and-glory mindset of an earlier day.
— Martin