Not Waving But Drowning

Stevie Smith

 Nobody heard him, the dead man,
 But still he lay moaning:
 I was much further out than you thought
 And not waving but drowning.

 Poor chap, he always loved larking
 And now he's dead
 It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
 They said.

 Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
 (Still the dead one lay moaning)
 I was much too far out all my life
 And not waving but drowning.

Commentary

One last hurrah for the ‘poems in movies’ theme.

I was surprised to find Minstrels hadn’t run this since it’s now quite a well known poem and one that often crops up on websites where people have collected their favourite poems. But there’s only one other Stevie Smith poem here and perhaps her rather quirky talent deserves more. She can sometimes be almost tiresomely whimsical, but quite often, as with this poem, this whimsy cuts through to reveal a bone chilling despair.

I thought this could go in the series of poems in films because I’m pretty sure its used in ‘Stevie’ the biopic of her made in 1978 which stars Glenda Jackson. The film is OK, it started life as a play and one gets the feeling it must have worked better that way. It’s too talky and everything is too much like a stage set.

But Jackson’s performance is good, both sprightly and sad, as one imagines Stevie must have been. And she plays off very well with the other good performance from Mona Washbourne as Stevie’s ‘Lion aunt’ with whom she spent her life. The interaction between the two is really warm and affectionate and the best part of the film. In the course of it several poems of Stevie’s are quoted, and this I’m sure is one of them.

‘The Faber Book of Movie Verse’ edited by Philip French and Ken Waschin list several other films based on the lives of poets, though they say that in general
“real-life poets have been romanticized in a dotty, sometimes unintentionally comic fashion.” For example they give:

— Vikram


The Wondering Minstrels, poem #1180 · 21 February 2003

Guest poem submitted by Vikram Doctor

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BTsugar03 · 27 April 2003

very interesting

Ray Alan F SSgt 53 WG/MO · 26 June 2003

Good afternoon,
I have read “Not Waving but Drowning” a dozen times, but I don’t understand the meaning. Can you explain what this is about. Thanks and have a great day.

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Francesca Keeling · 26 October 2004

Hello

I find this poem very interesting. If you know about Stevie Smith, you will know she was depressed and she unfortunately committed suicide. I think this poem is about her inner feelings of how people didn’t understand her and that on the outside she may have been a bright, funny person but on the inside she was dying. So this poem reflects that in my opinion and that she is in fact talking about herself but using a man as the character! Hope that might help some people understand it a bit better.

Fran

Dolores de Manuel · 18 May 2006

In response to the post that says

“If you know about Stevie Smith, you

will know she was depressed and she unfortunately committed suicide. “

Yes, she was depressed, and attempted to commit suicide in 1953. However, it seems that the suicide attempt was much more a cry for help than a determined try—the attempt happened at work where she was found and treated immediately.
She died of an inoperable brain tumor in 1971.